Lifeless.
The tower stood,
By no bounds.
With its words,
The words it spoke,
It broke all meaning.
Thus, the knight rode.
Steadily he rode,
And looked toward it,
That crooked tower that stood.
There he saw,
A man of higher stature,
The warden of knowledge.
Kind he was,
Unlike those he had crossed before.
"At the bottom,
The very bottom of this very tower"
Spoke the warden with fatality.
And so, the knight rode.
Steadily he rode,
And looked toward it,
The staircase to humanity.
There he saw,
An ordinary Blade.
Which bore a symbol:
"TO BE" is what it read.
The knight picked up his lance,
A gleaming lance of flame and death.
Out rode the knight,
With his lance in one,
And his Blade in the other.
There he saw,
A woman of desire,
The birth of pulchritude in his eyes.
Lucky as he was,
For she, too had been kind.
She stood and awarded him
With an iron Rosary
Marked with the words:
"TOGETHER"
She began to walk in a distance,
At last sought for the warden.
Once together, embraced
And collapsed, them both.
The knight unmantled his horse.
And dropped his lance,
As his steed fell shortly after.
He stripped his armor,
And left his lance of strength.
And so, the knight began to walk.
Dreary and lifeless as he did.
Looking up, his eyes met hers.
She smiled, aiding his salvation.
The knight lost in despair,
Began the words, "Thank You"
Presenting her a Rosary.
In an instance of panic,
A black blizzard of dunes dusted.
And his maiden lost.
From walking and walking,
The knight saw a weary traveler,
Which he presented his blade.
The traveler accepted,
Leaving the knight.
The knight was lesser now,
Beginning to see nothing,
Yet, strived to live.
Again, a horse in the distance,
Followed by a fair maiden.
He embraced her,
Dreary he was, but happy
And collapsed, them both.















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The first part seemed to me like persevering toward a very important goal with an amount of diligence that is heroic. Yet it seems to suddenly change as if to show how mortal things in our lives are. But then the end part seems to say that not all is in vain when they are reunited. I mean there is probably pages of interpretation that could be drawn from it but it boggles my mind. I have to say I haven't read alot of your work recently and now I remember what I have been missing.
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random? oh...oh well, I still thinks its freaking awesome... and I don't think I have ever typed freaking so that just shows how awesome it is!
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Anyway, although you say that in the end it is not in vain being reunited, I still believe that it's a shame that their seemingly wanted love were parted for so long.
I'm not sure, actually. I wrote this from having an inspiration last for a week or so, but never being or having the chance to write it down. I'm not sure who to interpret it, and so I'm asking my dA friends to help me. =/
Well, thank you for your critism. I will keep it in mind when I decide to look deep for the meaning and purpose why I have written this.
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